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How'd That Taste

posted 18th Apr 2014, 7:48 AM

How'd That Taste
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18th Apr 2014, 7:48 AM

Jon, Max, and Mac

Tin-man makes us think of Dorothy with a Shotgun. Maybe an idea for the Black Brick Road of Oz?

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18th Apr 2014, 7:57 AM

cattservant

A point of resistance!

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18th Apr 2014, 8:09 AM

Jon, Max, and Mac

Dahlia - 1
Chandler - a train full of soldiers, Nathan, and the General. Maybe Eversteene, too, by extension.

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18th Apr 2014, 9:19 AM

Matt Knab

Well, he couldn't just one-shot EVERYONE, now could he?

Favorite detail this page - beard stubble. :)

My only criticism is regarding the way the last two panels overlay each other. Artistically awesome, but the transition is a bit sudden, making it somewhat confusing to figure out. I think it's mostly due to the way he's lying at the bottom left of the page, breaking into panel 3 - at first glance it appears that he's walking towards himself.
For contrast, I love the way his head breaks into panel 1 - both looks awesome and is a great transition.

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18th Apr 2014, 10:07 AM

Jon, Max, and Mac

Thanks for all the feedback! One of the great things about indie comics is that you get to try things—and then hear back on whether they work or not!

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18th Apr 2014, 3:47 PM

Stever

Tastes like lead :P

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